![]() ![]() This is another continuity error along the lines of what I pointed out in the previous chapter. >The heart-rending blow of watching Applejack step out of that elevator… and realizing that Applesnack had intended to propose to her that very night, and she was anticipating it… oh Goddesses. She whines for several more paragraphs about how miserable she is, even claiming to have PTSD from losing a rib, even though she stated earlier that it had been healed with magic and she will sustain no permanent injury other than a scar. I'm sure kkat is writing from personal experience here. Littlepoop wakes up in a filthy, unfamiliar bed in some abandoned cottage somewhere. ![]() Littlepoop falls unconscious, has a flashback, and drones on about how shitty she thinks her life is for literally eleven paragraphs. We are nearing the end of the tunnel, thank God.Ĭurrently on Chapter 38: Peace in Our Time We are currently reading Fallout: Equestria by kkat. ![]() We take an MLP fic, read through it, and shit all over it discuss its literary merits. For anyone who stumbles across this thread and is wondering what it is, this is a literary review thread for pony fanfiction. ![]()
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